In the 2nd paragraph change the comma after the line to a period.
In the 2nd paragraph in the 8th sentence insert the word "not" between the words "are" and "sure"
In the 2nd paragraph insert the following as the 8th sentence of the paragraph after the words "... and filleted it":
"Jim retreated below deck to avoid swooning from the sight of a fish being filleted on Morpheus' fan deck."
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